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Critique, Mother, Myself


I see myself a vision of perfection, Regardless of what my mother says that only god is, If only god is I am god of my own self vision, Anything else is kept to myself as self imprisonment, I'm flawless regardless of the comments of my actions, I'm flawless for the fuel of my passion being critique as I am no motive for compassion, I hold my self in the highest regard, I know my mom does and shes the inspiration For getting far, In life, Life being perfect as long as I'm happy, And i'm happy knowing I am who I am and nobody else like me.
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andresc0217
My View Of Being Flawless #slam #Scholarship

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