Cupid's mistake
I love thee as a hummingbird a flower dost.
Twas your eye that caught cupid's attention.
She prayeth I'd find thee and blossom thy love.
Fain I did anon.
Twas not hard.
In love I fell at dawn.
"Thy has daring'st soul. Thy has not?
Thou, however, runneth the other way of a hummingbird's affection.
Wherefore, can't thy love thee as I do ?
"Hark hither" thy said.
I interrupted.
"Ere thee says anything, can't thou simply
appreciate thy's beauty?
The most bravest, intimidated by thou's brown eyes."
"I cannot loveth the bird, if I dothn't love the flower" She said.
Confused by cupid's selection said I ,
"Tis what this is ?
A lost competition of love to thy self?
Thou's my moon my darling'st.
I'm thy wolf."
But said thee ,
"The wolf hathn't been loyal if thy hath seen the sun,
the most bright star.
Thy moon 'tis pale compared to the sun's beauty."
I replied to thee ,
"Thou's my only star, therefore worry not.
The wolf's appearance 'tis a stranger til' night."
The mistress' look was puzzled.
"Tis a new experience for me.
I shall push away warmth. I am ill" She said.
"And just like thy moon, I'll hath left unwillingly
when the sun kisses thou's eyes."
"Wrong I shall prove you!" I said.
Twas morning and to my love's destination went I.
Just like predicted, she hath left me.
My flower's petals were closed.
Twas the moment when I understood,
the cupid's aim was wrong.
She hath left this world without loving herself...
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