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Daddy's Girl


Daddy's girl sits and waits for the bus to come as her heart aches, for she doesn't know what went wrong Daddy's girl is trying to find a bit of light in this darkness she is forced to call her home I don't want to be that girl anymore so I'm crying out I want to feel alive again and I'm sick and tired of waiting I want to feel alive again so come right in and pull me out Daddy's girl knows it's not the same as what it used to be for so much has changed but Daddy's girl still has hope and still believes that deep inside you are good.
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jwiener
I think it's very powerful that you used "Daddy's girl" repeatedly, because it subtly shows the complicated relationship of the girl and her father. Nice job!

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