Dangers of Submission
It’s like this.....I am giving you me. I am literally letting you have it. I am surrendering my mind, body, and soul. I am submitting to you completely. I am sitting here and bleeding my emotions through every single word. Im digging to my core for the rawest ore. The words are so hard to grasp it’s like being stuck under water and desperately needing to breathe. Stop running from me, I will chase you until my lungs collapse and my bones ache on fire. Stop i’m begging, so I can kneel with my head to your hand standing in front of me. I don't dare open my eyes for they cannot do justice to the masterpiece that lie before me. Do you see my heart in your hands. My soul escaping my body to be spent with you. My being following your every word. This is scandalous, so dangerous and I fear for my life. Chose the poison that will run from your lips carefully now. My destiny lies ahead and you are the sun I wish to follow without question and opinion. This is my decision. Don't leave dusted ruin and don't break my fragile hold. Please, I will do what i’m told.
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