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The darkest day

by Caleb carrasco

Todays the day, the darkest day The day you die, the time to say goodbye.  Todays the day, the darkest day The world just stops, theres nothing left All gone now its time to rest Todays the day, the darkest day Dont let go now, hold on tight Let me leave, make things right Todays the day, the darkest day    Ive hurt you so, not sorry though It feels so wrong the pain ive caused Todays the day the darkest day Just stop right now do not look back Here ends your life its time to die Todays the day, the darkest day.  Caleb Carrasco -The Darkest Day
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samueltfranklin
The repetition of 'Today's the day, the darkest day" strongly emphasize just how dark the day in question is. Furthermore, it forces the reader to more closely investigate the meaning of the poem, resulting in a poem which not only establishes its own emotive meaning, but which instigates some level of inquisition on the reader's part--which is always a desired effect in poetry.

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