Darkness

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77853
United States
30° 22' 24.5064" N, 96° 48' 49.1904" W

The words i hear you saying
turn my blood into ice
freezing in my veins
holding me like a vice
You say you're life is worthless
that no one would ever care
if you dissapeared like you were never there
the words you wisper rip at my heart
if only you knew how all the darkness
in your soul tears me appart
I didn't want to make that call
but there was no time to waste no time at all
there were tears and there was sadness as midnight fell
you tried to erase time
you tried to let it go
you tried to leave this world in a place so low
i had to make the call
i had to tell the truth
i hope that you don't hate me
because I will always love you

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