Deafly quiet.

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98632
United States
46° 8' 17.3724" N, 122° 56' 17.3904" W

The world seems to close in
I take a breath and try to break the silence
I hear the gentle thud, thud, thud of my heart
I concentrate, trying so hard
thud, thud, thud,
My world had become Deafly quiet.

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