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Dear Ala Moana


From all the places I visit in Oahu

You are my number one place to go 

you always impress me with your magic 

From the impressive firework show

to all your luxury imports

sometime's rude people are a pain 

especially when they don't move out of the way

Even in parking lots people are just in my way 

but all that doesn't stop me from experiencing your luxury ways

I don't let rude people stop me from getting what I want 

when I have friends and family with me

your more fun because I always find new places 

your prices for items is just outstanding

well I don't care your Items is just to nice to be cheap

when I have to return to Maui I am sad to leave 

you just always get me

The malls in Maui are nice to 

but nothing beats you 

you always satisfy my shopping needs 

you always make me proud 

Ala Moana

 

 

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