Dear Ala Moana
From All the places I visit in Oahu
You are my number one place to go
You always impress me with your magic
From the impressive firework show
To all your luxury imports
sometimes rude people are a pain
Especially when they don't move out of the way
Even in parking lots people are just in the way
But all that doesn't stop me from experiencing your luxury ways
I don't let rude people stop me from getting what I want
when I have friends and family with me
your more fun because I always find new places
your prices for items is just outstanding
But your items are to nice to be cheap
When I have to return to Maui I am sad to Leave
You just always get me
The malls in Maui are nice too
But nothing beats you
You always satisfy my shopping needs
You always make me proud
Ala Moana
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