Dear Angel

Sat, 05/26/2018 - 07:33 -- MS ATTA

Dear Angel,

I love to watch you sleep
I love watching you breathe

Closely, next to me
Gently, like the nightingale

On your bed when you turn you
Steal the curve of a loadstone

Melting like ice
Beautiful as paradise

My love for you is to the sky
And I pledge it will never die.

Good night Angel!

M.S. ATTA

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