Dear Sister

I see the misty skyline 

of a dirty city 

in the distance and i think 

what would you appreciate

about this scene?

which aspect would you absolutely adore?

and which would you wholly abhor?

You loved pretty lights,

on a night like tonight you'd love the pretty lights 

on wall street. 

You hated people, 

the couples kissing would disgust you. 

i like to think i could be like you, but 

Sam i like the water. 

I absolutely adore the shimmery surface of the sound, 

I hate the boats that abruptly burst the beauty. 

Samantha, I wish you were around. 

This poem is about: 
My family

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