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Dear Summer:


i thank you for another season when i can wear my nike air uptowns and polo shirts looking proper like the words use in a paragraph though i have to watch my back for goons around the corner plotting thank you for the spirits of the sun glowing brighter than a person with no sensibility have to be careful of heat waves that are stronger than a person's bad breath to be able to take a tan on the beach just got to make sure i dont get burn like someone having unprotected sex its nice to take a romantic walk by the docks make sure people dont litter on the rocks enjoying a time to have fun in the picnic just hope it dont turn into a battlefield over a game of cards Dear summer
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MVP-Most Valuable Poet
<p>Thank you&nbsp;</p><p>check out my other poems&nbsp;</p><p>check out my YouTube video call &quot; Being Poetically Correct &quot;</p><p>type and search &quot; Being Poetically Correct&quot;</p><p>subscribe and share&nbsp;</p>
Zion Omina
I love this
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<p>i&#39;m very grateful that you enjoyed my piece</p><p>i performed at nuyorican cafe although its been months ago</p><p>check out my other poems and provide me feedback</p><p>&nbsp;</p>
Imani Sophia
<p>that&#39;s the nuyorican cafe!&nbsp;</p><p>Awesome piece. It definitely reminds me of the summertime in New York, uptown style in the boogey down bx</p><p>&nbsp;</p>
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
everybody does have a favorite season i wanted to construct a different style to it because lots of events happen during the summer thanks 4 the support
jwiener
Everyone has a favorite season, and it was nice how instead of just writing about why you enjoy summer, you constructed this poem as if you were actually writing a letter to summer itself because it added another dimension to the poem.

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