Dear You

Wed, 05/29/2013 - 18:39 -- -C

Location

55372
United States
44° 40' 8.1624" N, 93° 23' 57.75" W

Dear Mom,
You set me free and let me be
In the world so vicious
but somehow you don't see.

Dear Dad,
I'm not as happy as I seem
To you I am good as can be
but too oblivious to hear my screams.

Dear Brother,
I could never leave you alone
Staying strong to watch you grow
but i'm sinking like a stone.

Dear Me,
Surrounded by monsters in the sea
I need you to see the brightness between the trees
Please, your sadness is killing me.

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savigirl14

Whoever you are, thank you so much for writing this poem. Its truly amazing and it makes people pay attention to you. Please read my poems and tell me what you think.

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