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Deceived Technology


We sit day in and day out, like zombies in paramount. Controlled by extraterrestrial forces and forced to lose our own devices. Technologically advanced.... is what they call it I call it drowning in robotics. Laptops, macs, ipads, iphones, I this, I that, all took place of We and us. Lost in evolution we have lost our lust for Adventure and creativity for love and Humility. Perplexed by machines that control our life, I sit day in and day out, wondering will my children see the rolling plains as I? will they feel the summer's breeze as I? Will they know what it is to appreciate nature as I? Controlled by technology I sit, day in and day out wondering will this evolution of man made technological advanced dogma ever end? I Sit and I Wonder. I Sit and I Wonder
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<p>i don&#39;t know how you feel&nbsp;</p><p>but i believe that technology takes way the imagination</p><p>takes away creative minds</p><p>this is an interesting and valid poem</p>
cdonnelly403
This poem is about how we all use technology everyday and maybe even too much.

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