Decisons
you can make a decision and think its right but its not right until you had a fight .
To think that everything is gonna be alright its just a thought , but its actually what you fought
See im tell you the rights and wrongs in growing up , its not about what you wear or how you look
Its about the steps you took , its like what u hear on the nes that some man got shot but you didnt know he was a cop
you think nobody is watching you over there , just so you know its the man from upstairs !
let me know what you think about it ! thank you
nancy ortiz
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Mix of personal reflection and universal moral lessons about growing up.
Multiple ideas compressed densely: decisions, fights, appearance, morality, surveillance.
Cautionary and serious tone with some redemptive message about growth.
Conversational urgency and direct address create moderate kinetic intensity.
Approximately 11-12 lines, spanning 7-15 range.
Minimal figurative language; mostly declarative and direct statements.
Primarily lyric/personal voice with some direct address to listener.
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