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Decisons


you can make a decision and think its right but its not right until you had a fight .

To think that everything is gonna be alright its just a thought , but its actually what you fought 

See im tell you the rights and wrongs in growing up , its not about what you wear or how you look

Its about the steps you took , its like what u hear on the nes that some man  got shot but you didnt know he was a cop

you think nobody is watching you over there , just so you know its the man from upstairs !

 

 

let me know what you think about it ! thank you 

nancy ortiz 

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Mix of personal reflection and universal moral lessons about growing up.

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple ideas compressed densely: decisions, fights, appearance, morality, surveillance.

DarkSentimentBright

Cautionary and serious tone with some redemptive message about growth.

StillEnergyExplosive

Conversational urgency and direct address create moderate kinetic intensity.

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 11-12 lines, spanning 7-15 range.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Minimal figurative language; mostly declarative and direct statements.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Primarily lyric/personal voice with some direct address to listener.

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