Deeper

by ifilackloveiamnothing

March 8, 2014

I want to love you so deep,

The oceans would be jealous,

but how can I put my trust

In tides that always change?

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Comments (3)

hamdi.mohamed001Mar 12, 2014

This is perfect, short and profound.

QVMar 11, 2014

A wonderfully brief quatrain. Sometimes a writer does not need to write long narratives if everything that be described in a few words- that is talent. The image of the ocean as the antagonist and protagonist is stirring and well executed. Keep on writing and sharing. QV

cherokeemoonMar 9, 2014

Sweet, deep, and short. This is great