Deeper

I want to love you so deep,

The oceans would be jealous,

but how can I put my trust

In tides that always change? 

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Comments

cherokeemoon

10 years ago

Sweet, deep, and short. This is great

hamdi.mohamed001

10 years ago

This is perfect, short and profound. 

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