DELIGHTFUL THINKING

February 15, 2014

VIEW ME AS THE MAN ON TOP VIEW THE WORLD WITHOUT CRACK ROCKS AND STEEL GLOCKS. LETS GET DEEPER THEN THE PEOPLE WE SEE ON THE NEWS. THE REAL PROBLEMS ARE THE ONES THAT NEVER GET VIEWS.WHAT ABOUT KIDS WITHOUT SCHOOLS ,CLOTHES.HOUSES OR FOOD.WHILE THOSE WHO DO, BE MAD CAUSE THEY DONT HAVE THE NEW SHOES. DONT BE CONFUSED MAYBE I AM ONE TOO,BUT WHAT I NEVER KNEW IS SOMEONE IS WORSE THEN YOU. WHICH SIDE WOULD YOU CHOOSE IF THERE IS A SIDE TO CHOOSE. SOME HAD NO CHOICE MOST NEVER HAD A VOICE. RAPPERS IN ROSE ROYCE BUT WONT DONATE TO A STRUGGLING GIRL OR BOY. WHERES THE VOICE FOR ALL THE VICTIMS OF THE WORLD. NO JURISDICTION CAN HEAL THE WOUNDS.MAYBE AS SOCIETY WE CHANGE VIEWS .

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GaryD.AlexanderFeb 15, 2014

<p>DRAINED FROM THE PAIN FLOODED BY THE RAIN ALTHOUGH THINGS CHANGE IT WILL REMAIN THE SAME. NOTHING IS NEW UNDER THE SUN KILLED FROM ARROWS NOW ITS THE GUN.PREGNANT DAUGHTERS AND CONVICTED SONS BROTHER RUNNING TRACK BUT HE DOESNT RUN.FATHER LEFT A TIME AGO AND MOTHER LEADING AS AN EXAMPLE.HE ONLY 17 AN LIFE GAVE HIM A SAMPLE.BUT HE DOESNT QUIT CAUSE EXPECTATIONS EXPONENTIAL AN HE VOWED TO BE THE S*** LIKE TISSUE. FILLED COLLEGE APPLICATIONS THE FIRST ONE DISSED HIM. MILITARY LOOKS LIKE GOOD PAY,BUT IN HIS HEART HE KNOWS IT'S NOT HIS WAY. HE A STILL GO TO SCHOOL EVEN IF HE GOTTA PAY,CAUSE HE DONE WATCHED SO MANY PASS AND FADE AWAY.EITHER HE ROLL A J OR SHOOTING LIKE MJ HE WANT A BETTER LIFE TODAY.ONCE HE MAKE IT OUT THE HOOD THEY WILL THROW A PARADE, DOES USING SLANG MAKE YOU JUDGE ME? IS YOUR STEREOTYPES THAT UGLY? WOULD YOU UNDEREYE ME IN PUBLIC? BEING AGGRESSIVE DOESNT MAKE ME THUGGISH IT MAKES ME MORE APPRECIATIVE FOR WHATS COMING.AN LIFE DOESNT JUST REVOLVE AROUND MONEY ITS BIGGER THAN A CURRENCY.BUT IN HISTORY ALL U SEE IS WAR AND REVENUES IT TAKES ALLOT OF RESEARCH TO VIEW THE GOOD TOO.I GUESS THE GOOD DO WHAT DEW DO.TO BREAK IT DOWN FOR YOU THERE IN THE MORNING AND GONE IN THE AFTERNOON.WHAT PART OF THE DAY DO YOU WAKE UP? I KNOW ITS A STRUGGLE BUT KEEP YOUR FACE UP #LIFE</p>