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Depression: A Poem


Hooded eyes: downcast, afraid Hunched shoulders, bearing the weight Sad smile, betraying the truth The pressure: too much for this youth. Weight: it settles right down On the chest, along with a frown Struggle, to lift up your chest Impossible: to be at your best. A smile: a glimmer of hope A mechanism, just some way to cope. The pressure, it isn’t for all The weight: it’s making me fall. Sadness: like a gentle cloak Stifling, it has started to choke My heroism is just a façade Cracking: you can see I’m flawed. Perfection: isn’t all that it seems Honestly, it tears at the seams Fraying, I’m losing it all From my height, I now feel so small.
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jwiener
Depression is a major issue that many people deal with, and something that more people need to understand. This poem is a great way to bring attention to how depression can make people feel, especially since you described each part of it. Excellent poem- you should check out "poetry writing tips" in the "resources" section for even more inspirational ideas!

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