Determination
Vision is fuzzy, and body aches.
Laying in a bed of golden flowers.
Knees covered in dirt, arms and legs bruised and scratched.
The light of the surface, shining down upon you.
A tunnel up ahead, rays of light escaping it.
Quiet water drops patter onto the ground from above.
You're not sure where you are, but...
Something about this place gives you a burning feeling.
A feeling of hope to escape this dangerous place.
A feeling of achievement to survive here.
This feeling of...
Determination.
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