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Determination Over Everything


My body won't move without purpose

I've set my mind to determined

You may not be achromatic in a journey with such passage

To my intellect I added magic of creativity

Some would ask how could I manage

Or how could I be so savage

Everyday I ponder what would I do if I don't get there

My ego would be devestated by something so tragic

There is no stopping in the middle of the track 

Nor falling of the map because motion is in process

Halting shall not help you obtain progress

Therefore more has to be brought to the floor

It starts from the core, so explore you inner self 

To find that desire of determination

Keep the patience before your whole plan is terminated

Keep all the misguided influnce eliminated

The comments can  be so harsh and shaded

But the strong and committed comeout to be the greatest

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