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Determined Youth


A young man with an abundance of faith and diligence.

Full of wisdom,

An expert at ignoring the ignorance.

One of the top students in his school,

Of course people acknowledged his brilliance.

Which caused them to feel jealous,

And made an attempt to antagonize him,

Of course they’ve wanted to agonize him.

He was going through a struggle

Even his family criticized him,

But with no father and all the odds against him

He uses it as motivation to continue pursuing his dreams.

So that’s what he’s doing.

Faith and perseverance are in his genes,

But working so hard

The stress he puts himself through is extreme,

But he wants to make sure he reaches success by all means.

Nothing can stop him.

He’s a soldier.

He can hold the whole world’s weight on his shoulders.

He’s strong,

His work ethic is monstrous.

He will never quit until he succeeds and becomes prosperous.

 
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