Diamond in the Rough
Walking down the placid streets
I spot a gleaming treasure lying on the tarred floor
I beheld a genie’s lamp gleaming under the scorching universal lamp
The hot metal burned my fingertips
I brushed my palm over the golden metalic lamp
And closed my eyes, meditating on what my heart burned for the most
I desired nothing materialistic, but something eleemosynary
I wish for the social system to break from his hidebound position
I desire for them to not view inner city children as destroyers of virtuous “status quo”
View them as diamonds in the rough
The fragile rose struggling to emerge from the unyielding field of concrete
Their location in the sea of society does not retard their ability to emerge from their swamp of doom
What retards their growth is the lack of tools needed to raise them from their position of distress
If given the encouragement and tools of success, they would be able to succeed
Society should act as a mother nurturing her needy child
The inner city children would be able to suck the milk of opportunity from society’s bosom
We are all small screws that hold together the world
All screws need to work together
Move as one wave pushing forward for the success of the entire human race
We must look out for those who are trodding slowly behind
So we can all succeed together
With this the world can progress together
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