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Did You Feel that Bass


I remember cruising around with the homies one day

We were listening to this song and I remember I was feeling this song

I was feeling the rhythm of the beat as it rushed through my body

Making my arms and head sway back and forth

Like, "Man this song is awesome."

 

And then, it hit me, BOOM

Like a lightning bolt that struck out of nowhere

I'm asking around making sure everybody okay

My friend looking at me like, "Man are you okay?"

I said, "Did you not just feel that bass."

 

The bass was so deep

Coins were rattling and jumping in the cup holder

The windows were shaking

Our seats were vibrating

And the only thing I could say when the song went off

was damn that bass was awesome

 

 

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