Didn't Even Notice (the real tragedy)
I can't say when it really happened
that I started to fade away.
But you, my sister, didn't notice
as my eyes were filled with grey.
now you say "My best friend died tragically."
to new people that you meet.
And yet you didn't even notice
As I stepped in to the street.
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