Disappointment

by tyisha_17

September 11, 2013

home is dark and cold

my brother btrayed me

the pain,the sorrow, the disappointment of my dad

eyes blood shot red from crying

hatered for my brother

alone,lied to,secretive, torn apart

9 years old and you are gone

dad where you going

im just going to the bar with john imma be back

upstiars crying in my room wondering if your going to come back

dad your my best friend i cant live without you

my brother hurt me and i cant tell you

i've been lied to and btrayed

sorry thats all i hear from you but i dont take it

you say im lieing but do you know what that means

Aaron your shady

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Comments (2)

TofuPandaApr 20, 2014

<p>I'm sorry you had to go through whatever you had to go through... But, rainbows come only after the rain; keep on keeping on, I know things will get better!</p>

tyisha_17Sep 12, 2013

<p>i wrote this because when i was 9 something bad happened to me</p>