Discombobulated
A heaving chest,
Quick breaths,
You stole the very air from my lungs.
A watchful eye,
Beautiful surprise,
You took my focus for yourself.
A thumping heart,
Set apart,
Your beauty overthrew me.
An aching soul,
Which you extolled,
You showed me how to love.
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