Distorted (Prophetess' Revenge 2) by: Jaay Dee Kayy
Every time I see a white windowpane, I'm reminded of seeing rain,
Little droplets, I'm dripping pain, one more drop and I'll go insane,
Life just shows you its ugly face, rears his head and attacks again,
All my demons won't go away, til I shatter and crack my face,
My reflection just causes pain, where is GOD when we need them chained,
Shit's been done that I can't explain, I'm alive so I can't complain,
Swear these niggas be inhumane, think girls here just to entertain,
Twisted mind's like a hurricane, a tsunami that never drains,
Aneurysm, my sickly brain, all this feeling I can't contain,
Double-mirror, both sides are stained, grainy images all remain,
Distorted figures, am I in vain? The twisted image, am I insane?
Pussy nigga didn't show restraint, why should I even try, retain?
I won't stop til the nigga's drained, til his body's a dust, a paste,
Finish the nigga, terminate, Prophetess throwing out the waste,
Bitch, you done, yeah you finished, back for revenge, end it in a haste.
AHH!
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Blends personal trauma with abstract philosophical questions about existence and sanity.
Extremely dense packing of ideas; multiple concepts per line with rapid topic shifts.
Overwhelmingly negative; despair, violence, rage, and suicidal ideation throughout.
Explosive kinetic intensity; aggressive diction, violent imagery, internal rhyme acceleration.
Approximately 22-24 lines; falls in the 16-30 range.
Heavy use of metaphor, simile, personification, and vivid concrete imagery throughout.
Predominantly lyric internal voice with brief dramatic shifts toward addressee/antagonist.
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