Dive Into My Thoughts

Dive into my thoughts.
See if you could swim, or drown in them.
Reach the shore, or sink to the very bottom.
Fight the stormy seas, or get swallowed by its waters.
Ride the waves, or get slammed by the tidal crest.
Will you take the plunge, 
knowing how violent the swelling of the ocean is?

Dive into my thoughts.
You will see the sullen sky painted grey.
The angry sea tasting a million tears of the clouds’ cries.
Birds with battered broken wings
Too worn to soar high,
Too faint to fly.
The showered kisses of the rain
With a cold bite of the wind—
Blowing a breeze of wrath
Pushing through the rolling waves
Rocking boats and sailing ships, 
As they struggle through the gale.
Will you still take the plunge, 
Knowing how violent the swelling of the ocean is?

Dive into my thoughts.
Wade in my water.
Come find me.
I’m STRANDED.

This poem is about: 
Me
Poetry Terms Demonstrated: 

Comments

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741