DIVORCE

by chey191997

January 22, 2016

DIVORCE defined as a seperation between two people defined yet so undefined because no definition is as real as reality words fly like sharp blades ripping into hearts as beats decrease decrease decrease young eyes gazing at two people shredding life out of each beat as they continue to decrease young eyes splitting from the seams as blue jeans have zippers that go off the track young eyes watching as there life disappears like a math problem dissapears off a dry erase board young eyes slowly closing because there nightmares are actually turning into there real life so they say divorce is defined by two people seperating defined yet so undefined undefined because adding young eyes its not two people its 1 2 3 DIVORCE defined as a seperation between two people and young eyes

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grace_taylorJan 27, 2016

<p>You have a great perspective going here, from the child. I would start with that, rather than the definition (just to give your words more action and intent). Be careful with your spelling! While getting creative with grammar can be part of the artistic appeal of poetry, if the errors look accidental it's distracting to the reader and could especially hurt you in the scholarship slams. Overall, very passionate content. I find that I like writing poetry I can relate to best.</p>

chey191997Jan 22, 2016

I hope everyone gets what the poem is about !! feedback and suggestions welcome:) thanks everyone:):)