Do I Love You More Than Me?

July 19, 2015

Do I love you more than me?

And if so can we both be free

Cause if I love you more than me

Then where is our ending

Do I love you more than me?

And if so can I never be free

Cause if I love you more than me

Then where is my beginning

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Comments (2)

L0v3P0r5h_1Jul 20, 2015

<p>Thanks for the correction. Much appreciated.</p>

AllenStoneJul 19, 2015

<p>where* line 4 and line 8</p>