Do the Math

Tue, 05/28/2013 - 12:09 -- rdifasi

Location

14891
United States
42° 22' 5.88" N, 76° 56' 28.536" W
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Two sides
one her, one I
not shades of grey
nor night and day
compliments
like marble rye
like acrobats
I launch, she flys
I am her, she is I
two sides we are
x=y

Comments

poe'schild19

10 years ago

Very good. Loved the wording, the rhythm, everything. You have the makings of a true master.

rdifasi

10 years ago

thank you! it's good to hear some feedback

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