Do You Love Me?

Location

92392
United States
34° 29' 7.5588" N, 117° 25' 13.4292" W

stare at your picture
Mindlessly wondering
Do you love me?
Do you see my heart tangle up in knots?
Or notice how nervous I am around you?
Meaningless conversations to you
Mean so much to me
One day apart to you
Another day closer to me
Vicious thoughts run through my head
But the poison is dead
Because of your head
I stare at your picture,
Do you love me?

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

very emotionally driven piece

powerful poem

continue to build off your ideas

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