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Does she care


She helped me up and I fell down 

She held my hand when I was lost in the crowd 

She brightened up my day as she took all the bad things away

Then that day came

I said hey then she walked away 

Then I fell to see if she would confert me

she looked away as she walked faster in fear

But as she saw me start to cry she walked passed and said hi 

I had hopes in my dreams that she would come visit me 

In the place we held hands wits lost in the large crowd 

and that was the last of hopeing and dream of the the girl

who held my hand in the large crowd 

 

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