very inspirationally driven poem
took a stand against bully-at school, at home
karma comes back beleive me when i say that
your poem reflects on your life experience that transform to the person you became
great job and keep writing

great job!!!

I love the message! The poem is phenomenal!!

amazing...

Great work! I enjoyed it!

I love how detailed this poem is. There was alot of emotion put into it. Love it!!

Great poem! I couldn't stop reading it even if I wanted to. The rhythm, rhyme, repetition, and diction really protrays this "go-getter" tone that is really inspiring! Please do keep writing on my friend.

Gotta love karma! Loved this. Good message! I can tell you care deeply about the subject. Favorite part was "he sees dragons when he counts sheep" I also love the kids spirit. Even though he had it tough, he faught for what he knew he deserved.

FANTASTIC

you nailed it. great poem

Idk why but I imagined this as a rap song and it actually wasn't bad lol

This is so beautiful omg

So powerful! I shed a tear very beautiful.

#STOP BULLYING

A very great poem, and inspirational as well; you did a wonderful job.

this is very powerful. I loved the message. I got bullied a lot growing up. I developed defense mechanisms to help me cope. When I picked out guys to date I chose the ones I hated the ones I saw bullying others I tried to get them to stop but they wouldn't. I got to experience the bullies life when I came to their houses and saw they had nothing. They were bullying so they could not be bullied and one bully broke down all my defenses. He was simply a man after all and I was a woman. we dated for a long time and it wasn't easy but I gained his trust. he showed me his world. his world was full of a mother who drank so much she forgot she had a kid and a dad who had beat him as a child but was no longer a part of this world but he still looked up to him because of the way his mother would ramble off about him being a great man and wishing he could remember him that way instead of remembering the fat lips given by his hand and the broken arm that he gave him with one swift kick. So while that little boy in your poem suffers so does the little boy tormenting him. i just don't want anyone to forget the bully could be hurting and in pain as well.

I am against bullying. I fought an older teacher before because I don't like her bullying my students. That is the time ur teacher-teacher relationship become sour. It's okay because I cannot tolerate someone, a so-called second parents of our school children bully anyone.