Don't Forget

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Every time we touch, my heart melts.
Will you hold my hand forever?

When I'm cold you give me your sweater.
Will you keep me warm forever?

When my time ends and you live on.
Will you forget me so soon?

Don't stop caring, don't stop thinking
About the day you said you loved me.

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phyllthehuman

You show a lot of potential! Just work on your fluidity a bit. 

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