Don't You?

by cjremick1

October 7, 2012

Don’t you realize Jesus Was born to die and take away The sins of the world?

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jwienerOct 19, 2012

This is a great example of how you can take an existing story and make it your own through poetry! I also liked how you talked directly to the reader and even asked a question, because it makes the poem more personal. Check out "poetry writing tips" in the "resources" section for some great poetry writing ideas to inspire you even more!