Doomed From The Start
Eldest son of them all
How was I the first to fall?
Alone I sit, inside this tomb
An overwhelming sense of doom
A first born son should be celebrated
Instead I was the first used for satiation
This does not bode well for future endevors
(If I can ever get my act together)
They called me Hades man of pluck
Although I feel I have run out of luck
Alone I sit, inside this tomb
Hoping someone will save me soon.
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