A Doubt

Sat, 05/17/2014 - 18:09 -- MEPR

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Kiss me

Set me on fire

Kill me

Will my deepest desires

Thirst me

Drink me up and leave me dry

Curse me

Lead me on with every lie

Want me

Love making me want you more

Taunt me

Push me away leave an open door

 

I loath you

Envy the way you're winning

The doubt might surge

Do I love you?

No, not like this, not now

Leave and it would be all the same

Comments

Immyself97

I really love the way it's written. Nice work =)

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