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Down


Down Down for me She say she down for the ride but... I don't think she was looking forward to all of the bumps and curves involved with the path that we were taking But as long as I was hers and only hers and never sold to anyone else the love that we were making... Then she was down Down for me. She say she love me but... I don't know what part of me she loves Whether its all of me or some of me but when I gave into her mentally she loved all the above Her love was so far up that she was down Down for me. She say she trust me but... I don't think she trusts herself or knows her own self worth. I didn't even think she was concerned about life because anything I said, she wouldn't even think twice, she even laid and gave birth, she wasn't even my wife. But by the time I came to my senses and realized that this woman was down... I was already too far in with lies and so many uncrossed "T's" and undotted "i's" that all she can do now... Is frown... Because she's down... Down because of me.
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