A dream

I really commend you for writing your thoughts! MLK was and continues to be an inspiration for change and a symbol of the progressive movement. His dream has inspired dreams in individuals and organizations alike. Your underlying message is definitely felt! There are few ways, however, to make the message a bit clearer. In any speech, essay, or even a conversation, holding onto one topic and fully discussing it always appreciated. Although my thoughts also tend to jump around when I write, it's important to holdfast to one idea or theme for the poems entirety. Otherwise, your message can (and often will) be lost. An example of this in your poem is when you bring up technology very briefly and then continue on to write about MLK's dream about God and unity. Your reasons for bringing technology and potential career paths into the mix is obscure. Simply stating, "The only thing that has advanced is technology", does the trick just fine! :) My advice is to allow yourself the time to feel inspired. Finishing a poem should never be a goal because then we begin to stray from our message in an attempt to move onto something else with our time. If your inspiration is at a low, drop the pen! Inspiration comes and goes like the seasons. This poem has A LOT of great potential and an incredibly heavy meaning! I am looking forward to watching you grow as a poet and sincerely hope that you continue to upload your writings! Thanks for sharing!