The Dreamer

by BCFoltan

January 7, 2014

She stands in a crowded place looking

Looking for something

For someone

Someone like her

She who sees things differently

She is alone

Alone in a world of strangers

Searching for something

For someone who dreams

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ElerieMooreJan 7, 2014

<p>When I saw the summary of your poem, I expected a poem with so few words would be awful. Instead, I was moved by the emotion behind your words. The placement of your words reads beautifully: the repetition drives your point home. I can definitely empathize with the girl who sees things differently. I hope you find someone like you: they do exist.</p><p>On the note of critique, I would add more specific imagery to keep the poem from appearing cliche or vague, and also to help the audience imagine themselves in the girl's place.</p>