Dreams

Pithy, powerful!

Last line, love it! Never thought of the subconscious mind as the captain...great figure of speech

<p>This poem is really pretty. I would print this above my bed if I didn&#39;t already have a massive poster.</p>

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<p>Powerful expression. Always let poetry fill your life. Keep expressing your heart. &nbsp;</p>

<p>This is so good!</p>

<p>Love the message you gave off ,amazing work i would love to read more of your poetry so keep it up 'check out my poetry and hopefully it inspire you and others&nbsp;</p>

<p>Short and simple yet outspokenly amazing.</p><p>Great Poem!!!</p>

<p>Very good poem! Keep writing on my friend!</p>

<p>Enjoyed this in all its simplicity!</p>

<p>When you incorporate the power of dreams into works beyond subconsciousness, you have then correlated true art, into a wonderous reality we can not physically see.</p><p>Very delightful in taste and vision.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>Humbly,</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>Jonathon Lee Singler</p>

<p>Charming quatrain :) I&nbsp; have tried writing some quatrains; however, they sound like imitations of The Rubaiyat.I find that a quatrain is a story in itself, independent of other sources, yet depend on others quatrains . I found the mention of both &quot;soaring&quot; and &quot;helm&quot; in your poem interesting, it suggests that dreaming is (at once) boundless as the sky, yet mellow as a boat on the waters (or maybe I am overthinking your piece. Q.V.</p>

<p>Beautiful.</p>