The Drive
All of the windows of the Ford Focus are silently slid.
Gusts of untamed oxygen and nitrogen eagerly suffocate
The lungs and gag the eardrums, obscuring the tune blaring
From the speaker. But this afternoon, the atmosphere refuses
To be sedentary while the shining, steering black bug scuttles
Towards sixty-seven miles per hour up route 390, converting
The grilling ninety-one degree vapors of air into a caroling
Chorus of April wind, rendering all other songs inferior.
As the sun’s swords, in a crescendo of flame, goldens
The parched grass into seven million fiery, twirling, hissing
Emerald blades, my blistered palms secrete sweat as they clutch
The steering wheel. With one deft motion they may screech
The tires to the left or right, yet another note subtly uttered
Into the symphony. They are in control-I am in control-
My life literally in my hands. My teeth, in a half grin, grit.
The grinding of enamel vibrates soundlessly, lost in euphony.
Under these blinding, bellowing heavens, the melody refuses
To cease-the wind only persists in its strumming. The Ford hums
Along to the orchestra. I wonder: the greatest song ever echoed,
Produced by a commute on a Saturday in June? I will realize,
Long before my foot, exhausted, releases the pedal and brakes,
How damn incredible this life can be. But for now my body feels
Only the speed, the thrill, the vocalization of molecules whizzing
Above the Earth that is common in any old, boring, afternoon ride.
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