Dropping the "f" bomb

July 19, 2012

wouldn't it be nice to start off by saying what the fuck sounds ignorant right, like mitt romney wining the elections, best of luck homeless man killing a person for a buck what the fuck females acting like birds in the bronx, just disperse and cluck what the fuck the knicks getting rid of jeremy lin, organization suck what the fuck dodge bullets in the bronx and duck what the fuck person committing a crime and escape in a truck what the fuck did i drop "f" bombs? i did, damn what the fuck!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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MVP-Most Valuable PoetAug 10, 2013

thank you for your commentcheck out my other poemsappreciate your feedback-very humblethis poem is made to be honest, and humorous

tangledbelleAug 10, 2013

I love the rhythm in this and the description. It's a great piece and I'm eager to read more!

MVP-Most Valuable PoetJun 9, 2013

thank you sweetie for the comment check out my other poems-give me feedback i will continue to rock lol ;)

hopeann20Jun 9, 2013

you rock

MVP-Most Valuable PoetJul 30, 2012

thanks for the support im humbly appreciative of your perspective about my poem

samueltfranklinJul 26, 2012

"Dropping the 'F' Bomb" has a powerful sense of rhythm which really adds to the flow of the poem, as well as a bitter/sarcastic sense of irony toward the end. A powerful depiction of life as it unfortunately exists in some places.