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Drowned


Couldn’t you advise me

I would be so sad

after giving you everything 

and just receiving trash?

I just want you to come back

because I used to feel free

but now I feel like I am drowning

in the deepest and darkest sea

Please help me, I can’t breathe 

if you aren’t the one who saves me

do you think I’ll rest in peace?

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