Drowning
Some things stick to you
Like hair on wet lips
Nagging for your attention
A harsh word
A look of disappointment
A bad day you thought would never end
Others wet your skin with oil
And stain your insides a deep deep black
That cannot be washed off
They make all of the others look so small
Until you don’t see them anymore
They are swallowed up into bigger thoughts
Good and bad
Old and new
Inventory has been taken
Didn’t you notice?
Of course not
You were drowning in oil
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