Drowning
One day you might slip
and feel like you are going down and down
with no way of getting out
you're in, over, your head
and you start to choke on the water
it is all around you
you can't get away
so you hold your breathe
and you take the plunge.
Down and down you go
and you see your life passing you by
like your watching it from the sidelines
you see it start to slip away
and theres nothing you can do
but take a deep breath...
and hope for the best
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