Drowning
Trying to catch a breath The waves crashing on my face Swallowing gulp after gulp after gulp Trying to fight, trying to be strong Every time I rise I see the land, the sun Back down, back under More darkness, more pain Why? Why not just stop Why? Why have hope I’m going to quit, I’m done Wait... There’s a boat I’m waving I’m yelling Using the last of my energy The last of my willpower Please see me Please save me They're turning around They're coming me way They see me I’m going to be okay
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