Dud

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     We burned like neon

           Bright and quick

                  Captivating

                         Exhilirating

                               Lips forever chapped

                                      Your moan

                                                jingles in my ear

                                                      quivering

                                                            not as low as you want

                                                                  addicted to the sound all the same

                                                                        falling short of effervescent fireworks

                                                                               the light just

ends.

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