East of the Sun, West of the Moon Retelling
In a land of ice and snow lived a
girl, dressed in a wolf pelt, with a smile as
dangerous as the tundra. She lived in a dilapidated
cabin with her parents and eight siblings.
On a night where the wind howled harshly through
the holes in the cabin, a great white bear came crashing
through the front door,
giving the gaunt family quite a shock when a smooth voice came
pouring out of its cavernous maw.
Promised,
jewels, gold, clothes, wildest dreams fulfilled
all in exchange for the company of their youngest daughter,
a fierce girl of only sixteen years, a girl with
stars in her eyes and adventure in her heart.
In hope of saving her family from the eventual
starvation that came with living on the cruel fjords,
so, the girl left with the white bear. The magical beast carried
her to its reality-defying castle, where the bear told her that
the castle would fulfill her every wish, so long as she lived
with the bear for a year and a day.
That night when the girl lied down to sleep,
she was awoken by
a stranger who crawled into her bed.
Night after night the stranger came, but the girl
could never make out any features of her nightly companion,
just the unmistakable feeling of falling in love.
Many months later,
the girl mentioned missing her family terribly.
The bear told the girl that she could go and visit her
family, but she must not talk to her mother alone. With the
girl’s promise, the bear whisked her to her family’s grand mansion,
so, far from the modest cabin she remembered.
The night before the white bear returned,
the girl’s mother pulled the girl aside and
asked if the girl was well
cared for. The girl told
her mother about her mysterious bedmate. Her mother,
in such a fright, exclaimed that the girl’s nightly guest had to be a horrendous
beast and gave her youngest daughter a tallow candle, to light
so, she could see the face of the stranger.
Her first night back at the bear’s castle, the girl waited until
the person beside her fell asleep before lighting the candle.
Illuminating the stranger, the girl was shocked to
discover that it was an ethereal girl,
with hair, the color of the white bear’s pelt and
skin pigmented like chimney soot.
So, enraptured with the unnaturally beautiful girl
that laid next to her, the girl did not notice the drops of tallow drip
onto the night shirt of the slumbering girl. The girl woke
with a shout and promptly began to weep,
asking the girl why she had looked upon her sleeping form.
The girl goes on to tell the tale of how her stepmother
cursed her to live into the form of a great bear,
until she could find a girl who could love her for a year and a day
without ever seeing her true form, but
because she had looked at her before
the time was up, the bear-girl would be forced to marry her
grotesque stepbrother. The real reason her
stepmother cursed her is because she did not believe girls
should love other girls.
The next morning, the magical girl and her castle had
vanished, but the girl realized that she had truly loved the
other girl and did not want to live separated from her. So,
she began walking east, until she came across an igloo of a strange
woman, with a golden apple. The woman introduced herself as Helen,
and told the girl that she would help her in exchange for her story.
The girl told Helen of the girl who was cursed by her stepmother
and how she must reach her before she is forced to marry her stepbrother
because she is loved her.
Tears fill Helen’s eyes, because she too had fallen victim to love. Offering
the golden apple to the girl, she pointed her further east, to the shack
of another old woman who might be able to help her reach her love.
After walking for what seemed close to forever,
the girl came across a sorrowful woman who was running
a golden comb through her locks, upon seeing the girl the woman
waved her inside. Once they entered the shack, the woman gestured to a piece of
parchment on a small wooden table and the girl read what
was scribbled on it.
It explained that the woman’s name was Cassandra,
that a man had once courted her because of her luxurious locks,
but when he found out she saw the future,
he cut out her tongue and banished her to the tundra. It also
said that if the girl would tell her a story she would give her the golden
comb and directions to another woman who might be able to help her
reach her lost love.
Cassandra ran the comb through the girl’s hair while the
girl told the tale of the girl who was cursed by her stepmother
because she did not love who the stepmother wanted her to love.
Moved by the tale, Cassandra gave the girl the comb and a team of
sled-dogs to help her reach the woman at the edge of the artic.
Following Cassandra’s directions, the girl reached the cabin of
the woman who lived in the impossible land where the ice met the desert.
Music lilted out of the cabin’s windows, as the woman plucked the strings of
a golden harp. The woman called for the girl to enter and the woman
introduced herself as Medea. She told the girl that she would give her the
golden harp and get her to the girl who wore the skin of a bear, if she
would tell her a story.
While she made the potion, the girl told the story about the girl who
was more beautiful than anything that existed in all
four corners of the earth. The potion finished as the story ended, Medea said
she was going to harness the four directional winds to carry the girl to
her love, but she would need the girl’s name to bind the spell.
The girl spoke the name Kalinda as she gripped
the golden harp, and was swept into the air,
leaving Medea behind.
The winds delivered Kalinda to a castle that was neither mist
nor earth, where the girl once again laid eyes
on the girl who claimed her heart.
The bear-girl could not hear her shouts but her shouts did not go
unheard. The guards took Kalinda to the throne room
where she met the girl’s stepbrother.
Kalinda begged to be able to be allowed to see the girl
who is also a bear, but the stepbrother denied her request unless she
could give him three gifts that had been gained through the power of words.
Kalinda retrieves the golden apple, comb,
and harp from her belongings and handed them to the greedy stepbrother.
Ever a malicious creature, the stepbrother told Kalinda that she could
see the girl at the wedding and not a minute before. Dread enveloped
Kalinda and she sunk to her knees on the steps to the throne.
Soon the bear-girl was dragged into the throne room.
When she saw Kalinda, she burst into tears and threw her
arms around her. Suddenly, an impish gleam flashed in her tear-filled
eyes. She turned to her soon-to-be husband and asked if she could ask
for her wedding present early, which he granted. She then asked a guard to
retrieve a bucket of soapy water and her shirt stained with tallow.
She said that whoever could wash the tallow from the shirt would be who she
would marry.
While her stepbrother complained to his mother, the girl whispered
to Kalinda that her stepbrother was part hobgoblin, so he would never
be able to clean the shirt, only make it worse.
The guard set the bucket in front of the stepbrother who, begrudgingly,
began to scrub the shirt, but soon grew angry at the worsening stains.
Once he gave up Kalinda sat behind the bucket and began to
clean the shirt, the stains lessened until they were nonexistent.
She presented the shirt to the crowd that had gather around her.
The bear-girl’s stepmother and stepbrother raged around them,
but there was nothing they could do.
The bear-girl ascended the steps to the throne and
announced that as rightful queen Hakidonmuya, she banished her
stepfamily, and that she would marry the girl she loved,
the girl who had cleaned her shirt,
Kalinda.
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